Our Country getting taken over.

WALT - write a narrative story about the  given picture prompt.

SUCCESS CRITERIA -
use show not tell sentences so that the reader can visualize what is happening in his/her head.
Use figurative language like metaphor, simile, personification, onomatopoeia, alliteration and so on.

nouns
adjectives
verbs
adverbs
conjunctions
Figurative language
Sini
Sione
Teariki


Poor
Willing
Impossible
& serious
Finding
Decide
Avoid
& prepair


One day I woke up to the beautiful birds singing and then I did not know where I was. While I searched the place where I was then I look to my left there was Sione and on my right there was Sini my 2 best mates from school.

When we got together we made forts everywhere and we made spears knifes and plenty more items. After we finished all that we went out to go hunting for food Then we heard other people talking and walking.

Later we were following where we were then we came to a small village with food but we didn't have any money to spend so then we walked back and made a track to where we were going.

So that we know where to go and where to get shelter if our forts get busted. While we walked back we saw a big reindeer looking for food as well then I grabbed my bow and arrow and shot it.

Sini was saying " Shoot it i'm starving" I replied to him " Just wait I need to get a clear shot". After I shot it I sparked a fire sione went to get some more firewood and Sini was preparing the food for us to eat.