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Wednesday, 6 July 2016

Narrative writing.

“Happy birthday to you” my mum was singing to me and then I woke up with a big smile on my face then my aunty woke up while we were singing to her as well because we have the same birthdays. When we all woke up my mum took us out  and gave us some money to spend while the our family was at home decorating the house.

When we were at the Auckland city we went to the movies and watched Transformers 4. When it was finished we went down to the game centre and I won two big teddy bears that has those three different coloured cords ( because we needed them to spy on thieves).

Later It was getting dark and we needed to go home While we were walking to the train station we saw my mum looking for us then we were calling her then she turned around and shouted “ COME OVER HERE THE CAR IS JUST AROUND THE CORNER” and the we replied back to her “ OK WE ARE JUST GETTING OUR BRAND NEW SHOES WE ORDERED”.


Later when we were getting our shoes I was so tired like I just wanted to get out of here and go home and sleep but then I remembered that my mum was throwing me a party. While we were going home my mum asked me if she can see my shoes and I said “ yes”.

When we arrived home we walked in we heard noises and while we were walking in everyone was shouting “ HAPPY BIRTHDAY” and thats when we were all having fun and we had heaps to eat to.  

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