Narritive writing

The bush

by Teariki

TEARIKI

Every picture tells a story.

Use your imagination and experience to narrate (tell) a story about the photo.

Where are the people going? Why?

What problem is caused? How is it solved?

Think about:

• where your story is set
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• the problem and how it is solved
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

2016-2-19

On a Saturday morning My family and I are going on a bush walk. When my brother woke up and screamed“ Get up get ready for the walk” I woke up and yelled “ it’s walking day”.

When we all woke up my mum was grumpy because of my brother and I were yelling and said to all of us “ get ready hurry we got to beat the traffic. After that we all were in a rush just to jet ready.

The bush walk took place at Saint John's.Once we arrived I was the first one to jump out of the car and grabbed my bag then started walking with my brother and sister. My sister's name is Mahaleah my brothers name is Iraia.

So when we were walking my mum said “ wait for us” then we were waiting for them. When we started walking my brother was happy he was running down the hill and then running back up to us.

Lastly we got back to the car at 6:00 and then we arrived at home about 6:30 then my mum said “ How was the walk” we all replied back “ I’t was amazing we should go again tomorrow.